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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by deluminator 

7th March 2012:
Excellent chapter. Excellent, excellent, excellent!

Helga's final moments, her final musings were so insightful and Salazar forcing Riol, of all people, to kill her was disgustingly cruel.

All in all, this chapter had me so agitated. I was so hoping that Godric would see reason and spare Riol or that Rowena would speak up and expose Salazar. This story is so amazing though, in that it is not predictable and can stir such feelings in the reader.

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Review #2, by pennyardelle 

10th August 2011:
For a little while there towards the end, I was sure that Godric was going to refuse to kill Riol...but I guess I should have known, after reading 10 chapters of this story, that things weren't necessarily going to go the way I had expected! :)

I love the way you set up Helga's death, especially her last few moments. In that, I think we got a glimpse of a very different Helga than the one that appeared in the majority of the story. It's amazing how much depth all these characters have!

On to the epilogue...can't wait to read the end!

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Review #3, by crystle 

2nd February 2011:
who is going to turn it into a school?

Author's Response: You'll have to wait until the epilogue to find out. ^_^ Thanks for reviewing!

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