6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Akussa 

3rd December 2011:
Hi! You're tagged!

I really loved this opening chapter. The idea behind it is great and I think you showed a believable storyline. Harry was spot on. His reactions were perfectly canon and you really captured his original fear of not finding the platform and expended on that nicely.

I really enjoyed the conversations Harry had with his mind. They were believable and sad but definitly the kind of thoughts that plague you when you are in such a situation!

Great job with the opening chapter, it'll be interesting to read where this decision will lead Harry and Hedwig!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter, particularly as a beginning chapter.

As well I'm so glad it was realistic. I based the majority of his worries (at least before they took a magical turn) on my sorts of worries in those situations.

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Review #2, by magicmuggle01 

26th August 2011:
What an interesting concept, Harry missing the train. This is a fantastic start to your story and I give you 10/10 and must read on.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review! I'm so glad you liked the start of the story!

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Review #3, by Slytherin_Ravenclaw_chick 

18th July 2011:
Hello, here is your review from SlytherinRavenclawChick:

This is a very interesting and well thought out plot of Harry that is fascinating. The story itself and the intrigue it presents will certainly grab readers. Also, the grammar, flow, and emotional reality of the story makes it very good. Also the ending with Quirrell was interesting. I can't wait to read the next chapter. 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm so happy that you liked the first chapter- that you think it will grab readers. I'll definitely re-request for the next chapter! Thanks again!

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Review #4, by spencefa 

11th February 2011:
That chapter was very good, it is intriguing me to see where you go with this.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!

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Review #5, by marissa lily potter 

16th September 2010:
This is an amazing start to what I know will be an amazing story. Usually I'm not a fan of anything that's really far off from canon but this is absolutely wonderful. I couldn't resist reading on and on and was upset when the chapter ended. :) Great work and I can't wait to read the next chapter.


Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm hoping that the next chapter will be up soon.

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Review #6, by DeliaDee 

9th September 2010:
A very good beginning. I've often wondered what would have happened had Harry not run into the Weasleys. I adore Hagrid but if he understood that Harry didn't know what the Leaky Cauldron was, or how to get into Diagon Alley come to that, it should have stood to reason that he would have no idea how to find the platform. But this is Hagrid we're talking about. Wonderful but a couple of egg rolls short a combination platter. My heart goes out to Harry, though. I'm so glad he still has Hedwig. What a great girl she is. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! There'll be more to come shortly. What do you think I could improve upon?

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