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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by patronus_charm 

10th July 2014:
Hi again!

I really liked this story as it was fun to get a perspective on what the guys of Unsinkable were up to now. All the Molly and Arthur things were so sweet! ♥ I loved how Arthur was still blushing at the mention of them, and would still blush for quite a few years to come. Another thing which was so sweet was the baby news and just how cute it was. Gah, you are seriously the Queen of this ship and you just write them so well I canít imagine anyone else attempting them.

But the thing I admired most here was how despite that fluff you managed to interweave the serious things too such as Voldermortís rise to power and the danger it was posing for all of them and it was really clever. Ooh, and I also loved how you liked in a little Hattieís chapter and how her mother had escaped him already. It was so sweet what Cosmo did for his mum though and that he wanted to try and protect her so much as you rarely ever get to see that lovely mother-son relationship but you wrote it so well here! I canít wait to read on and find out more about the others now!

-Kiana
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Review #2, by RonsGirlFriday 

9th March 2011:
Ok, so I legitimately thought I had read this whole fic already, but I recently realized that was not the case! So I'm back!

I am always in awe of how perfect the interactions are between your characters, how everything you write flows like butter. Like buttah! And the amount of adorable constantly emanating from Arthur is going to kill me. In the best way.

I love the reference to how the Burrow was named. So cute!

And the end of this chapter was so heartbreaking. Poor Cosmo. It was written just perfectly.

Cosmo was one of those characters in Unsinkable who really just flew under my radar. I liked him of course, but he didn't stand out to me as much as, say, Reid (whom I want to *squish* and love forever). But the point of this is that it's really nice to just see a whole chapter devoted to Cosmo and what he's dealing with here, and that's what I love in general about this whole series of one-shots. :-)

Melanie

Author's Response: Yay! I love getting reviews from you.

Arthur is sweet, isn't he? lol. I love him. He's a great character in the books, I get such a kick reading him. So of course I love writing him too. Thank you sooo much for the comment on my buttah-rific flow! *restrains a squee*

I threw in the Burrow bit almost as an aside - I can't decide if I fully like that explanation, but it was fun to add in.

Cosmo didn't get a lot of screen time, but he's still part of the group, so I gave him a one-shot in this collection to show a little more of him. It's tough times for everyone, especially a Muggleborn like Cosmo.

Thank you for reviewing!


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Review #3, by GinnyCullen 

3rd October 2010:
Just when things are happy, Ol Moldy shorts has to go an ruin it! He is such a funsucker! Molly pregnant that is amazing I am so happy to see that you included something as fantastic as that. I was heart broken that Cosmo had to use the charm on his mother... It is rather sad things came to this in the time of the war. I can't wait to see what Reid Has been doing! Great job as always

Love GinnyC

Author's Response: Yeah, from this chapter on out, it's a lot about the war. It sort of colors everything. And I wanted to tie in the Weasleys to every chapter whenever possible. I also wanted to use the opportunity to explain why Molly and Arthur weren't part of the original Order, and I think it must've been the kids. She spent most of the 70s pregnant. Poor Cosmo, but he had to protect them. I think more Muggleborns must have done this sort of thing than is talked about, you know?

Thanks so much for the wonderful review!


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Review #4, by Georgia Weasley 

20th September 2010:
How utterly gutwrenching. Poor Cosmo. As always, this is a brilliant glimpse into the lives of the characters you've created. I always expect to see them on the Lexicon. Well don, hon. ~GW

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I think a lot of them got the short end of the stick in the first Voldywar - although they came out of it better than many, so it could have been worse. Poor Cosmo. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #5, by Kristin 

19th August 2010:
Doctor Who :)

Is Cosmo going to die? I've got a bad feeling ...

Author's Response: In 1970, he's got the Third Doctor. I looked it up haha. That's right around when they colorized the show, too. Anyway, ah... I actually haven't decided yet if Cosmo will live. I'm leaning towards yes, though. But we'll see. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #6, by Jen 

18th August 2010:
Just read the first three chapters and (as usual with your stories), absolutely loved them. You bring out all sorts of emotions in me. Thankyou so much for the little insights into their lives.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! This review really made my day. It was very sweet, thank you.

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Review #7, by evil little devil 

18th August 2010:
Cosmo! I'd forgotten about him a little, it's good to find out more about him.
You capture the atmosphere of war perfectly, it's very believable. I can imagine the chapter happening inside my head, your writing is very visual for me. And congratulations to Molly!
I thought it was a really touching ending, I can definitely see the Gryffindor qualities in Cosmo. I feel incredibly sympathetic for him, but I also rather admire him.
I can't wait to read more, I simply love reading all these little snippets of the OC's, they're absolutely fascinating and you write them gorgeously.

Author's Response: I wasn't sure if I should go ahead and write one for him. He kind of got left behind a bit in "What It's Worth", but I like Cosmo. I haven't thought as much about his future as some of the other characters, so it was fun to think of what happens to him right after school.

The other two chapters were pretty lighthearted and romantic, so this moves away from that. Cosmo doesn't have a romantic interest at this point, he just has his aspirations to fight against bigotry. And I've always felt Arthur's lack of participation in the circa-1970s Order needed explaining. I've always suspected it was his growing family, so I wrote it that way.

I'm really glad you liked the Cosmo chapter. Thank you so much for reviewing!


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