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Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

30th March 2011:
Horray for romance in the middle of a war :) Great chapter and very well written now i shall go on to the next one

Only 4 more and i'll be done with the Slytherin and Hufflepuff chapters YAY ME

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Review #2, by witch_in_training 

15th August 2010:
Ron's sheer admiration of Hermione throughout the whole piece was touching. It's really the best way to portray love in a time of war; he can't help but regard hold her courage and determination.

One of my favorite lines was Hermione laid a hand of his arm and any fears he had had was overcome with calm. Although, just nitpicking, I believe 'was' should be 'were,' and I know "of" was a typo (which I actually didn't notice till I copy/pasted, enamored as I was with the line itself :P). It's really sweet that one touch from her and all of his fears disappear.

The way they mutually decide to continue holding each other at the end was also sweet (I can't find another word that I want to use instead, so I'm just going to repeat myself). The title sums it all up perfectly without really saying much at all.

Good job on this! Ron/Hermione is a ship I love to see written well. :)

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