4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

30th March 2011:
As much as i despise Percy its a shame that he died:(. anyway great chapter very well written. and now off to the next one only 5 more chapters to go and i will have completed all of the Slytherin and Hufflepuff chapters YAY ME!!!

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Review #2, by theelderwand 

19th August 2010:
This was just beautiful. I hate to say it, but I always wished it had been Percy and not Fred who had died. It would have been so much more appropriate, a final act of contrition for Percy to have saved Fred and paid the ultimate price for it. Until I read this. Heartbreaking. It truly was.

An excellent piece of writing.


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Review #3, by maskedmuggle 

14th August 2010:
Awwh! This is so sad! It's a very emotional-provoking story!

THe writing is simply fabulous. I find it hard to get into Percy's head, but this shows me Percy's personality in a new light. It gave me a look at Percy in a completely different perspective, and I really like what I see. It's so sad that he dies, but its great that he dies in a hero.

All the memories are so sad, but I like how you mention his relationship to every member of the family. It's interesting in the order in which you mention them. And it's so great that all his memories are about his family, and there's nothing there about past disputes or the ministry/business.

Really well written, and very touching.

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Review #4, by Northumbrian 

14th August 2010:
I'm always a little wary of AU stuff. It's just me.
Nevertheless, this is anice little one-shot and I can see Percy dying instead of his brother, and being proud of the fact.

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