3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by maskedmuggle 

19th August 2010:
Wow. This is amazing. One of the best Remus' collab fics I've read yet! What made this stand out was your amazing characterisation of Remus. It was perfect, spot on. All his thoughts are so real! What he thought of Tonks and Teddy was spot on, but it takes someone skilled to write it so well. This whole story is really well written, I loved it. The last line is a powerful ending. It's a pity that Remus and Tonks both die :( I'm glad you didn't end it there though. Most Remus' fics have him and Tonks die, so this was a good change.
I really enjoyed reading this! You did an amazing job!

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Review #2, by baletgir 

14th August 2010:
Great job! I love how duel focused you made this, obviously this was a battle and the dueling was most prominent, but it isn't the easiest way to really speak of a character and show who they are. You were able to do the successfully in my opinion, for that this was wonderful. I really see Remus feeling everything you wrote here.

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Review #3, by Northumbrian 

14th August 2010:
Interesting twist.
Right up until the last couple of paragraphs I thought that I was reading another "Remus dies" story. It was a nice surprise to discover that I wasn't. You capture Remus' maudlin thoughts well.

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