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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by lia_2390 

19th August 2010:
You really kept Snape in character here. I could almost hear him berating Harry in my head. I like that you chose this particular part of the battle, where Snape faced off against his former colleagues and teachers. He was conflicted more so than usual because he was worried about Dumbledore's plan falling through. It was a pity he never got to turn his wand against the Death Eaters though.

I enjoyed this piece, you wrote it really well Penny ^_^

Lia

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Review #2, by baletgir 

14th August 2010:
Another great piece Penny! And filled with dueling! (Can you tell I am going backwards through the Colab?) I love how you portrayed Snape, as a good guy though still with some Slytherin qualities, for example being worried about himself and how he looks to others and not being a coward. Though it sounds a bit shallow, I really don't think it was of him, after all he risked he deserved to be remember for the truth at least. I also enjoyed the familiar lines you used from DH.
:)BaletGir

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