4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

30th March 2011:
GRRR Narcissa allowing Voldermort to kill Harry for good what will the world come to now? anyway great chapter now off to the next one :)

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Review #2, by propertyoftheHBP 

19th August 2010:
Wow. This is (for lack of a better word) awesome. The AU twist was genius and I absolutely loved it. I'm very inclined to think that it would have went this way exactly had Narcissa told the truth to Voldemort. What she did in the books was very risky, though she was likely overthinking the situation. Here she knew--or thought she knew--plain and simple, that Harry had to be absolutely dead for her to find Draco. And then Harry already knew that Voldemort's bit of soul inside of him was dead, so he took off running. My favorite part was definitely where Voldemort was saying "Avada Kedavra!" over and over and over. It's so eerie and disturbing, but that's very much what he would have done at the thought of not being able to kill Harry.

Shortly, I loved it. The idea was a wonderful one and you executed it perfectly. :)

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Review #3, by maskedmuggle 

19th August 2010:
Wow. This is seriously one epic collab fic! At the beginning, I was thinking this is a typical Narcissa story, but it wasn't.

First, because it was more well written then the average one, and
Second, I'm sure you already knew this, because of its AU ending!!
I loved the characterisation of Narcissa - This line is so true, "She heard her sister's voice, admiration and love in her tone that Narcissa had never heard her use when speaking to any other man, not even her own husband." Although you didn't mention Bellatrix, that is so totally Bellatrix.

The AU ending is what made this different to the other stories. I was waiting for that, he's dead thing, but suddenly I'm reading "He's alive," and I'm going what? did I read it wrong? I re-read it and I'm like, OHHH, it's AU! Haha, I loved it though!

The ending was great. (well not that Harry died,) but the way you made Voldemort keep on killing Harry with the curse even after he died. And the way he killed him while he was defenseless truly shows how cowardly Voldemort is.

I LOVED this story! There's not many AU fics in this collab, so yours is a definite stand out. Well written, and a very enjoyable read! :)

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Review #4, by Northumbrian 

14th August 2010:
An interesting look into Narcissa's mind.
I often wondered why she chose to lie to Voldemort. It was extremely risky. Her only reason was that Voldemort believed that because Draco hadn't left with the other Slytherins, he'd switched sides.

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