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Review #1, by alicia and anne 

14th August 2011:
This was a sad one.
You wrote Remus really well in this and the fact that he would be happy to lose his lycanthropy if he died and would finally be normal was a nice addition to his thoughts of his son and just how great he was.
I got really sad when he said he thought he was winning and then how he didn't even see his wife fall until it was too late. The battle is such a sad and horrific time.
I really enjoyed reading this one

alicia and anne

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Review #2, by maskedmuggle 

14th August 2010:
*sniffles* That was so sad! I"ve read a few different stories on Remus/Tonk's death, but this is one of the saddest ones I've read.

You made me really think about parents and children, and how important the love of family is. I thought this was really well written, and I love how both Lupin and Tonks both fought to the end. I think it's good that Lupin died because he was looking at Tonks. That shows that he's human. I only didn't like how Lupin was "convinced that I was winning" and "in my cockiness". It just seems out of character for me, but its still plausible I guess. Other than that, I thought the personality of Lupin was well maintained.

A very emotional piece, very well written.

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Review #3, by Northumbrian 

14th August 2010:
This is a nice little story of the end of Remus but, like a lot of stories submitted for this challenge (my own, too, I suspect) is could have done with another read through. the flow was spoiled by lots of missingspaces like reallyis timewith evermet wasn'thappy.

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