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Review #1, by alicia and anne 

14th August 2011:
I love this idea! I would have never thought of writing about Lily, James and the others watching him from the afterlife. But they must have been too. They must have felt so hopeless from where they were. You wrote how I imagined them all to be so well and I really enjoyed reading about what they thought about the battle. Especially Lily being the worried mum.

alicia and anne

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Review #2, by propertyoftheHBP 

15th August 2010:
Oh, I loved this one, as well. I like how you've set the afterlife (with Remus with all of them, I can only hope that this is connected to your previous piece somehow. :]) as a very human place. I love how it's in the Gryffindor Common Room as well, and how they're all acting like kids again. You've characterized Lily very well, along with the other three. Sirius, especially, is hilarious. ;)

Again, I loved this. I love reading the pieces about Lily before/when she sees Harry again, and this is no exception. :)

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Review #3, by maskedmuggle 

14th August 2010:
Wow. This is such a brilliant story. I love the Marauders, and you brought them to life here. All your characterisations are excellent, I absolutely loved the James and Lily bickering! The "Then we'll get to see him that much sooner" was humourous and quite smart, and I liked that line a lot! It's interesting to think that the Marauders spend their afterlife in Hogwarts, and a doorway appeared to signal it was time to go. A clever concept though! I like how Lily accepts that Harry is special, and that because of that, "her son would not fail. He would save the world." That was a great ending line, and I thought this whole story was really well written, and very enjoyable!

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