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Review #1, by propertyoftheHBP 

15th August 2010:
This was an interesting snippet of the battle. It's really sad to think Padma died--both sets of twins we know in canon losing a half of their set--but it's plausible and you wrote the scene well. I think that you characterized Cho very well here--I like how attached and close she is to Hogwarts. (Not to mention that "Hogwartians" is a very funny word, indeed. ;]) I liked the mention of Lisa Turpin and Orla Quirke, as they're usually rather forgotten in fanfiction.

So, I liked this! You did very well with the character of Cho and the scene surrounding her, good work. :-)

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Review #2, by baletgir 

14th August 2010:
That was a much sadder side to the battle than most of what I have been reading in the colab. I am sure it was difficult to write, but it is a truth of war. I like how you write Cho, especially the familiarity of her crying which you added in at the end, but at the same time I really liked how you had her try to stay strong at the beginning. Good job!

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