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Review #1, by propertyoftheHBP 

15th August 2010:
Ha, I really liked this guy's attitude. The "boy-who-didn't-get-enough-hugs" thing was hilarious, as was the whole summarization of the wizarding wars. This piece showed how some people didn't just fight for or against Voldemort--they had a whole host of reasons, and you demonstrated one of them, family, well. I loved in the end how he killed the Death Eater just nonchalantly and randomly like that, it really fit the rest of his character.

I loved this! I'm seeing so many original ideas in this collaboration and your piece here is no exception. :D

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Review #2, by maskedmuggle 

14th August 2010:
Awh. This story was really interesting to read. All the talking about the 'boy with no hugs" is interesting. It was just interesting hearing this person's take on the war. I wonder who it was. I can't recall someone called Eddie... the protectiveness of his little brother even in the face of danger is definitely love. It reinforced the idea that love is what will succeed over death. "Should have paid more attention to the fine print shouldn't you have Voldy?" Classic line, I loved that!. The theme of adrenaline is good, I can imagine how exhausted they would be... All in all, really well written, and an enjoyable read :)

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