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Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

30th March 2011:
wow i didn't know that Seamus had a brother! and more improtantly that he was there too :) Great chapter and now i'm off to review the next one

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Review #2, by propertyoftheHBP 

15th August 2010:
Wow, this is such an original idea. I really like it, and it seems plausible enough that a wizard's/witch's sibling (or perhaps parent) would feel the need to go to battle, too. I think that you characterized Connor and his little knowledge and larger ignorance of the magical world well, it came across as very believable. I really liked the part where the man asked where his wand was; that gives the explanation as to why he won't be kicked out of the grounds/Hogsmeade for being a Muggle. I loved the last line, it was hilarious and fit the situation nicely.

I really liked this! You had a great idea for it and executed it perfectly, great work! :]

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