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Review #1, by melian 

22nd August 2010:
Nicely done! You really got into Bella's head here, which is something you should probably be proud of though I'm sure it's not a nice place to be. The three scenes you covered were done very well and I really enjoyed reading her disdain for her opponents, and even for Harry for trying to Disarm Voldemort instead of using an unforgiveable against him. Excellent job.

cheers, Mel

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Review #2, by CornishPixie 

16th August 2010:
I almost feel GUILTY from watching the Lupins die from the perspective of the person who did it and LOVED it as it happened. But it was extremely well written and in perfect Bellatrix character. Her one line about having killed Tonks' pet dog showed her uncaringness perfectly. What a horrible person Bellatrix is, eh? I've been convinced for a long time that she is just completely messed up and this story shows for sure that there isn't even one strand of kind hair on this woman's head.

And the mention of her being upset that the war was over was a very great thing to add! Oh my, I just can't get over how cruel she is.

I loved the bit you did about after she died. How perfectly ironic, that she would be the one to come back just in time to see her worst nightmares coming true. That was a very nice touch, and I must say that I was glad when she was getting pulled into the darkness. She deserves it. Thankyou for writing such a good story and making me believe that even more.

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