4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

31st March 2011:
Great Chapter i enjoyed reading it and now off to the next one

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Review #2, by Capella Black 

21st August 2010:
This story properly cracked me up! Argus Filch firstly bothering to confiscate something while evacuating a school, and then throwing it into Carrow's face - classic!

The plot in this story is great, and it's really helped by the speedy narrative, which keeps the pace of the story to stay high, and thus exciting. The writing also flows really well, mixing internal musings with action narrative in a good balance. Good stuff.

That last line though, is what cracked me up the most - even now, when he's running for his life in a school full of potential killers, he's still preoccupied by the fact that he enjoyed breaking a school rule. So Filch.

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Review #3, by theelderwand 

18th August 2010:
Filch! Never could stand him, but I must say you did him justice here. This was great: "He simply thought there was a time to treat a child like a child, and a time to treat them like the adult they should be trying to grow into (he hadnt quite found an instance yet where the former situation applied, but he assumed the time would come eventually).

Pefrectly in character for him to make a big deal out of a dung bomb, but it was just great that he ended up using it himself, and LIKING it.

This was a fun tale.


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Review #4, by propertyoftheHBP 

15th August 2010:
Haha, the title is quite fitting for this. ;)

It was hilarious, and you captured Argus' character very well. His musings on why exactly he doesn't hate children are too funny, and the lines "Of course, Poppy wouldn't agree. She would rather be handing out sweets and plush toys in the middle of a fatal situation," were possibly my favorite out of the piece. It's hilarious to see the two of them working together with their very different ways and his intentness on getting back to record the dungbomb. And throwing it at Carrow? I think it put me at a loss for words. xD

In case you can't already tell, I loved it! You've got a fantastic lot of pieces for this collab with original ideas and scenarios that are very well-written. :-D

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