5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

31st March 2011:
NO Luna CAN"T DIE!! :( Great Chapter i enjoyed reading it and now off to the next one

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Review #2, by Capella Black 

21st August 2010:
At this point into the collaboration, AU can only be a good thing! This is a very sad and bittersweet piece, but it really fits with Luna as a character - her unwillingness to kill, her defiance in the face of violence. I adore the penultimate line particularly - really adds poignancy having the main character seeing the bright side of death!

One thing - why is Luna fifteen? Is that part of the AU, because according to canon she'd be either 17 or 18, depending on when her birthday is. Just wondering.

Other than that, a nice concept, and a well written story.

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Review #3, by theelderwand 

18th August 2010:
I liked your characterization of Luna. You've matured her, made her more world weary, less flighty, the result of her imprisonment at Malfoy manor and the horrors she's faced, I suppose. It works. Though this is a rather somber tale, it was entertaining, kept my interest. I particularly liked the wrap-around ending.

Good work!


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Review #4, by maskedmuggle 

14th August 2010:
Awh. Such a sad story. It was very well written. The characterisation of Draco is perfect. As for Luna, I thought your characterisation was a bit off. The idea that she has never been afraid of dying is excellent, but some of your paragraphs didn't sound very Luna. Like, "I've always been book-smart; there's no doubting that." I don't believe Luna would say something like this, but who knows?

The idea that Luna has never been afraid of dying is a great theme to base your story on. Your story was an enjoyable and interesting read!

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Review #5, by ericajen 

14th August 2010:

Heh. Anyway, that was intense. Very different than anything I've read thus far. I'm glad you took advantage of the opportunity to write AU, because not many people did (that I've noticed anyway) but there are so many possibilities with it!

It was written well and the execution of your ideas came across very well. Job well done.

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