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Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

31st March 2011:
yay for the grey lady! Great Chapter i enjoyed reading it and now off to the next one

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Review #2, by Capella Black 

21st August 2010:
Yay! Go go Hogwarts ghosts! While this isn't the first entry into the collaboration to use the concept of a ghost being a good distraction technique, the story is still refreshingly original, simply by having Luna be the one to suggest it. I can certainly see Luna picking her own house's ghost to ask this of, and I like the idea that the Grey Lady does it, but isn't sure until afterwards that it could actually work, that she could actually help.

There are quite a few typos in this (mainly things in the wrong tense) which could do with editing, but I understand how pressured things were to get these in by the deadline. Still, the writing itself is lovely, particularly the altered dialogue, showing the Grey Lady's natural era - Luna so would be the type to take this into account!

Nice one shot, thanks for sharing it.

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Review #3, by propertyoftheHBP 

15th August 2010:
You illustrated Helena's feelings perfectly here. Her regret, remorse, feelings of shame and fault were all wonderfully written and very believable. I absolutely loved how Luna made an appearance near the end and how she was the one to get Helena out into the battle. Her medieval-times dialogue was hilarious as well. ("You could help, noble Helena, if you only followed me," and "Luna Lovegood, milady".) Oh, and I assume that the woman with the green hair was Tonks? Adding her and Ginny was a nice touch as well.

I really liked this! I haven't seen too many pieces about the ghosts of Hogwarts during the battle and this was a nice one at that. :-)

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