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Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

31st March 2011:
poor collin :( Great Chapter i enjoyed reading it and now off to the next one

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Review #2, by Capella Black 

21st August 2010:
This is a very cool concept. I love how you bring long forgotten canon into the story and use it to create such an original plot line. I also love how you have Luna being able to speak Squid, and more importantly thinking that this was sufficiently normal that it didn't need mentioning!

I must admit though being slightly confused by the final line of dialogue - what is it that Colin didn't forget, and how is it that he's coming? While the concept of him trying to keep his promises to his brother, despite not surviving, is great, this line just doesn't quite explain itself sufficiently. That, or I'm just being blonde (I actually am blonde, so it wouldn't be the first time!)

Otherwise though, this was a lovely story, casting Colin in the light of a true hero, without making him anything but a Creevey!

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Review #3, by propertyoftheHBP 

14th August 2010:
I love how you worked the Giant Squid in! This was a really great idea and it was pulled off spectacularly. The part where Colin died was really sad, so that was done well as well.

The dialogue between Colin and Dennis was written well, and I love how he went to Luna for help with the Giant Squid. It was hilarious how they went underwater with their water-repellant robes, and Luna's little conversation with the squid.

The ending where it flipped to Dennis was a really nice touch.

I really liked this--the title was hilarious, too. :)

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