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Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

31st March 2011:
GO GINNY! Great Chapter i enjoyed reading it and now off to the next one

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Review #2, by Capella Black 

20th August 2010:
Hmm, an unusual focus for a final battle story, but a nice change after all the horror and sadness. I like how you keep Cho complex in this - she's both petty over her rivalry with Ginny, and yet self-aware enough to realise that it's petty. I also like how she eventually realises that while she's suffering at the potential loss coming, Ginny is suffering far worse, and that she needs to back off.

A good exploration of the quoted text - potentially a little more of a role than would have been given to them at the time, but an interesting concept nonetheless.

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Review #3, by propertyoftheHBP 

18th August 2010:
I've never thought about what would happen during those moments in the Room of Requirement when Luna and Harry are gone in the tower, and the description here was a really good explanation of that. Though I'm not too sure that Ginny would have approached Cho like that, I'm sure that the thought crossed her mind at least once, and the conversation was written well and plausible. I also really liked Cho's musings on how it was possible that Harry would turn up dead just like Cedric and how you described Ginny's appearance as less-than-beautful--I found both of those elements of the story to be very believable.

I liked this, even though I found the premise of it to be slightly unbelievable on both Ginny's and Cho's parts. It was well-written and the description of the situation was great. :-) (Oh, and I loved how you included a chapter image! I haven't seen that before, it really caught my eye.)

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Review #4, by AndrinaBlack 

15th August 2010:
I have to say that I don't really believe that a discussion like this would have happened between them. I think they would just have kept away from each other and been polite if they had to talk to each other at that time. However I can see this as the feelings that they had for each other and I can see that Ginny would have wanted to say these things. I could think that this would have happened in one or the other's head.

You however wrote it very well and got the personalities of both of the girls down. I like that you made Cho nice and likeable too. There is far too much dislike for Cho in my opinion. I enjoyed reading this piece. :)

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