3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

31st March 2011:
Poor Crabbe he never did have any brains did he? anyway great chapter and now off to the next one

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Review #2, by Capella Black 

20th August 2010:
Is it weird that I still kinda feel sorry for Crabbe at the end of this? You paint him as utterly despicable and evil, and yet, you make him make sense. He wants to make his father proud. He wants to finally be good at something. He's willing to risk his life to fight for what he believes in.

Yes, he is irreparably wrong, but his decisions make sense the way you write them. As such, the final line seems less like hilarious hubris, and more like sad dramatic irony. Weird.

To summarise, congrats on writing a complex and believable piece based on a pretty un-likeable character.

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Review #3, by witch_in_training 

14th August 2010:
I love reading this kind of story, where you know how it all turns out but the narrator doesn't. This gives a little more perspective into how Crabbe felt about what he was doing

I liked Malfoy's little plan, and the fact that he came up with it; that's a good way to show that even though Crabbe can do Dark magic pretty well, he's still the not-too-bright character we know from the books.

This was a neat little one-shot that adds that little bit of humanity to a minor character. What he's doing is still wrong, but it gives a reason for why he thinks it's right.

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