3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

31st March 2011:
Horray for Remus, Sirius, James, and Lily staying until the end :) Great chapter and now off to the next one

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Review #2, by Capella Black 

20th August 2010:
Very AU, but still very true to the spirit of the final battle, and very true to the character involved. I love the way you reference the other characters in this story, based on how Lily would know them - it really helps us to get into her eyes, separate from how a student would see it all. I also like how you've separated her take on things from those of Sirius and Remus, as each one would have had a different level of insight as to what was going on.

I also love how you've paralleled to the story of Romeo and Juliet - nice concept.

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Review #3, by AndrinaBlack 

15th August 2010:
This was very sweet and at the same time a bit sad, with the already dead marauders and Lily. I also noticed at some point that I started to see it from Lily's point of view, especially as she was watching what was happening to Ginny. That brought tears to my eyes though I knew that they were going to survive (or suspected, since of course this could have been more AU and not have them survive). You also did a good job portraying the characters in the story.

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