6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

31st March 2011:
YAY Luna! Great chapter and now off to the next one

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Review #2, by Drummergirlred 

22nd August 2010:
174... I like the Slytherins return to the battle and Luna's comment about a lot of Slytherins in the Room of Requirement. I like that Daphne/ Blaise pair which can help explain Astoria/ Draco. Nice little story.

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Review #3, by Capella Black 

20th August 2010:
Yeah yeah, we all love Ravenclaw! OK, sarcasm over, this was an epic piece of writing. All three main characters are spot on, and I particularly love Luna's dialogue - utterly childlike, and yet wiser than anything the Slytherin's can come up with. Best line has got to be "Oh, but I thought he was going to destroy everything?", because only Luna could pull this line off - anyone else would sound sarcastic, and start an argument, but Luna just sounds profound.

It's also a really great way to have Daphne change her mind, because of course Voldemort was going to be destroying a lot more than the things she didn't like. I love how you don't have her being selfless, or ashamed - she does the right thing for pretty much every wrong reason possible. That makes it a whole different level of realistic.

Great stuff, oh mighty brain-washer!

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Review #4, by melian 

20th August 2010:
Wow. I really liked this. The idea that an offhand remark from Luna could in fact end up inducing a few people to join the fight rather than flee from it is a great one and, to Daphne Greengrass's credit, it's great that she actually listened to her. It may have been reluctantly but she listened and she thought about what Luna said, and she went to fight. That's fantastic. I just love the concept of Luna as accidental cheerleader for the resistance in this way - it's totally in character for her and it was very well written. Great job!

cheers, Mel

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Review #5, by maskedmuggle 

19th August 2010:
I loved this. Luna is one of my favourite characters, and I really liked how she was in this story! You characterised her perfectly. I hate it when people write Luna, but as a normal person. In this, you maintain her personality, her dreaminess, her weirdness... to create a realistic story. I loved everything Luna said, it was just so Luna! Daphne and Blaise were an interesting couple to put in a conversation with Luna, but I thought they were well characterised as well.
Loved this! And I love (Lucid) Luna! :)

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Review #6, by ericajen 

14th August 2010:
Huh. I liked this. Luna's characterization was really well done, which is an admirable accomplishment as she is just so difficult to get right. And I liked your portrayal of Daphne as well. I like that you gave a Slytherin a chance, so to speak. Not all Slytherins could possibly be evil and I'm glad you conveyed that through your interpretation of Daphne.

And I kind of LOLed at the line about taming a Blibbering Humdinger. Hahah.

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