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Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

31st March 2011:
Dang Centaurs never getting involved...Great chapter now off to the next one

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Review #2, by Capella Black 

20th August 2010:
Did you Ravenclaws have some kind of secret challenge to get the phrase 'blue and bronze' into every one shot?! Feel like I'm being brainwashed - you won't get me, I'm red and gold all the way!

Having said that, I do love some of the entries you Eagles made to the collaboration, and this is no exception. The line that really sums this piece up is "To keep peace he had to fight for it", and that is a really great insight into the centaurs. They hate to fight, hate to get involved in wizarding affairs, and so it's really interesting to see an account of how and why they would be convinced to go against this.

Nice stuff, but I'm on to you!

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Review #3, by propertyoftheHBP 

15th August 2010:
I really liked this, you wrote Ronan's character very well. From the flow and style alone in this piece, I could tell that it was about a dignified creature like a centaur. I liked how you worked in the blue and bronze--that was very creative and painted a haunting picture in my mind. Also, I really liked the comment about everyone being able to see the thestrals. It had actually never crossed my mind before but it is a very disturbing thought. I loved this piece, the situation with the centaurs was described well and the overall description was very nice. Good work! :-)

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