7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

31st March 2011:
Go lee Go Lee! Great chapter and now i'm off to the next one!

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Review #2, by Northumbrian 

22nd August 2010:
Lee Jordan, master dueller caught me by surprise. I've always thought of him more as a talker than a fighter but with one simple sentence:
"If there was one thing you learned by being friends with the Weasley twins, it was how to undo jinxes and hexes."
You've proved that he's both. This is both funny and oddly chilling. Very Good.

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Review #3, by Capella Black 

20th August 2010:
Is it a battle to the death? Is it a quidditch game? No, it's Lee Jordan, through and through!

Great story EJ - you've really made the final battle comedic, which for any viewpoint but this one would be bizarre and wrong. For this one though, it's exactly right, and thus very fun to read. Best line of his has got to be "I'll be here all week..." - this is funny, and also shows that despite the choice to face things laughing, he does indeed understand the seriousness of the situation.

I particularly like the aside regarding the benefits of befriending the Wealsey twins - really good point, and helped ensure things seemed cemented on the character in question. Great stuff!

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Review #4, by melian 

20th August 2010:
Erica, this was hilarious! I can really see Lee doing commentary all through the battle, whether out of nervousness or to help hide his fears or whatever, and the sense of humour of the person who was, after all, the twins' best friend really came out here. Really, I'm still giggling. Really really well done and a very original POV to take. Great work!!! :)

cheers, Mel

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Review #5, by theelderwand 

16th August 2010:
That's going to leave a mark!

I'll be here all week

This stuff is priceless. Lee calling the comentary for the battle? Excellent. Got me laughing all the way thru this. Really great, funny stuff here EJ!


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Review #6, by maskedmuggle 

14th August 2010:
Haha! I loved this story! Wonderfully written! I love the idea of Lee Jordan's inner commentator! And Lee Jordan had great characterisation, and I love his personality! I love how he's still joking in the face of fire. The characterisation of the Death Eater is wonderful too, though I'm not so sure he would've done a Jelly Legs Jinx - an unforgivable is more believable, but it went with the story! I loved the ending line. It's so Lee Jordan and it adds a bit of a humourous touch to the otherwise serious situation.

Really well written, and such an enjoyable and interesting read!

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Review #7, by alicia and anne 

14th August 2010:
hahaha I loved this so much! it was so funny and so Lee! I loved his commentary especially his comment on how he was here all week.. or that he hoped he was. And his little celebratory remark at the end. Pure brilliance! I am so happy I read this. I loved it so much.

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