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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

31st March 2011:
who would have guessed that the shattering of the hourglasses would promote house unity in the middle of a battle :)

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Review #2, by Capella Black 

20th August 2010:
That's a cool story, a great concept. I love the imagery in this - how to start with, all she can see is the sapphires, but then she begins to see the other gems too, and the other colours in herself and Davies. A really good extended metaphor, and a really nice realisation for the character to come to.

I also love that they take the wounded to Ravenclaw common room - that certainly wouldn't have been the first place that would occur to me, but then again, it would probably be the last place (after the Hufflepuff common room) that would occur to the Death Eaters, and as such it's a perfect choice. Wise Ravenclaw, that one!

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Review #3, by AndrinaBlack 

15th August 2010:
I think I ship Roger Davies/Lisa Turpin now! I loved how you mixed very Ravenclawish stuff with unity between all the houses in this story. You also made great images of the jewels, sometimes beautiful and sometimes funny in a way with the jewels in their hair and everywhere.

The story flowed very well and I also liked the feeling of how they helped the wounded. It was kind of cute in a way. The only critisism I would have is that she seemed to be moving very easily with the body even though she was levitating it and for a moment I forgot that she had another person with her. But that's not a big deal. Very well done! :)

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