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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by deluminator 

7th March 2012:
A battle? I sure hope so!

You know, I am so happy that I am reading this story now that it is completed because I am so painfully curious as to what Salazar has planned and what role Rowena is playing in his plans and also what it will all mean for Helga and Godric. It is all so enthralling, I think I would have a hard time waiting otherwise.

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Review #2, by Chasing Whimsy 

11th September 2010:
A truly delicious read. I love the way you've made the characters your own, especially since we all know of them, just not who they actually are. Excellent attention to detail, I'm looking forward to your next update :) 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you, Chase! I'm so thrilled to hear that you're enjoing this fic. And, needless to say, I really do appreciate your kind comments. The next chapter is in the works and I should have it posted by next weekend. Until then, take care and be well!


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Review #3, by pennyardelle 

15th August 2010:
Only three chapters left? Wow! I am torn between feeling sad that there are so few, and excited that I'll get to see everything unravel. :)

I'm of course very suspicious about this whole surrender that Rowena orchestrated--since she made a deal with Salazar, I can't imagine that he is really being completely honest with Godric. Whatever it is, it must be a pretty complicated plan, since Rowena was willing to go to the lengths of telling her warriors to surrender.

I really love the simplicity that you approach magic with in this story--it's very rudimentary and uncertain, which I find to be so much more believable in a story like this, where magic is really not that well-known or widespread. And I also love how you tie in things like the use of owls, giving an explanation for things that are so commonplace in Harry's time.

Wonderful chapter, as usual, and I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Hi pennyardelle!
Yup, only three more chapters left. Honestly, you think I might have finished this story sooner, haha. ;)

You're right to be suspicious of Rowena's supposed surrender. Salazar is the villain in this story, not that I have anything against him as a character, I just needed someone to fill the role of antagonist and he fits it perfectly. Although, to be honest, Helga is no angel herself. ;)

I'm so glad you liked my approach to early magic. I always thought it might be very rudimentary during this time period, with wizards, as well as Muggles, trying to find their place in a swiftly changing world.

Again, thank you SO much for your continued support and patience! I'm hoping to have the next chapter posted in less than three weeks this time, so keep your fingers crossed. ^_^ Until then, take care and be well!


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Review #4, by Jen 

9th August 2010:
Another wonderful chapter. I find this story completely riveting.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Jen!

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Review #5, by Miss Lily Potter 

8th August 2010:
Okay, so I'm officially a fan of your writing. ^.^ I read the first chapter and I could tell that this was a great story.

I was right.

I'm really not a fan of Founders, but the summary drew me in, and I'm glad it did.

I'm so intrigued by all the relationships, and I want to see how this is going to culminate. I love the little touches of what is canon about the Founders, that you turn on thier heads.

Agh. Great story. (:

Author's Response: Hello Jasmine!
Oh, thank you so much! I'm so very glad you enjoyed this. ^_^ And, needless to say, I really cherish your feedback. It's always great hear what I might be doing wrong, or right, for that matter.

Again, thanks for everything! I'm hard at work on chapter eight and should have it posted in a few weeks. Take care and be well!


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