7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

30th March 2011:
Yay kreacher rallying the troops and yay for the house elves standing up and fighting

Now off to the next chapter

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Review #2, by Capella Black 

18th August 2010:
Whoa! You know, I think you just made me fall in love with Kreacher. That's scary.

Seriously, though, this is a great extension of canon, and a clever interpretation of the limited information we have. It had never occurred to me that the house elves would have heard the Dark Lord's announcement, nor what it would have meant to Kreacher in particular. I just love the idea that it was that which pulled the House Elves to arms, and that he would be so desperate to save Harry because of the fact that he had already lost Regulus.

Really unique take on things, while remaining true to both the letter and the spirit of canon. Beautifully written too, which is always awesome!

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Review #3, by momotwins 

18th August 2010:
Kreacher is brilliant in this. A leader for the house-elf army! I really enjoyed reading your take on the elves, I think you captured them very well. I could totally picture Kreacher standing there lecturing the other elves, goading them to fight. Great job.

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Review #4, by melian 

16th August 2010:
I've see a few house elf fics in this collab, but not all of them have really felt like the house elves, if that makes any sense. This, though, was Kreacher through and through. His frustration at not doing anything and then his conviction that, if Harry was indeed dead, he'd not done his job properly, was very well done and gave a really good background for his brandishing of the kitchen knife at the end. Great job!

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Review #5, by ericajen 

14th August 2010:
That was great! I loved it. The house elf stories are really a favorite of mine and you really executed this well. I loved Kreacher's strong bravery and his sense of wanting to avenge Regulus and everything. Kreacher is just such a fun character to read. Your ideas were really clever and interesting and also written well, so good job(:

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Review #6, by propertyoftheHBP 

14th August 2010:
I love this! It's so cute but at the same time I love seeing how Kreacher has developed into such a strong house-elf. I really like the thought of him being the one to get all of the house-elves up and running to battle, and his pleas and speeches to the elves are perfect.

While this line was bittersweet and sad on Kreacher's part, it was also my favorite: "Because, if he was dead, than Kreacher had failed at his job again."

It shows that even though Kreacher's ready to fight, he still hasn't gotten rid of the house-elf attitudes that had been engrained in him.

I really love this, it's well-written and a fantastic idea. You did a great job! :)

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Review #7, by Ronsgirl29 

14th August 2010:
Aw Kreacher! That was so sweet! I smile every time I read the line where Kreacher is frighting. It really shows how much he changed once he got a little respect from Harry.

I loved your characterization of his as well as the other elves. It can't be easy writing from the p.o.v of a non-human, but you do it wonderfully!

Great job :D

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