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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by GNcat1 

13th November 2016:
This is a really good opening for writing a novel about the changes a live Tonks and Remus would have in a post war era. Go for it!

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Review #2, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

30th March 2011:
YAY for Teddy saving Remus!!! now off to the next chapter i'm past the halfway point in my reviews YAY ME!

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Review #3, by theelderwand 

20th August 2010:
I was hoping someone would write a tale that found a way to save Lupin and Tonks. But, to have Teddy do it by timeturner was an excellent flourish. As was the slow reveal that it was him. I had my suspicions, but it was still well done how you clarified it in the end.

Eldy

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Review #4, by maskedmuggle 

19th August 2010:
A very interesting story, that's for sure. I quite enjoyed this!

The characterisation of Remus is fantastic, as is for Tonks, and the Death Eaters! The story flowed really well, though there were one or two sentences that didn't really make sense - like the first one, and a spelling mistake, but it's no biggie.

The main thing I loved about this story was how TEDDY was in it! That made it original, and stand-out, and I love how Teddy saved his father! The one thing I thought you could've done better was the ending.
Instead of ending with, "Who knew what the future would now hold", you had the potential to create a more powerful line.

Well done though! Loved it! :)

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Review #5, by Capella Black 

18th August 2010:
Y'know, I was wondering who that young man had been! I was all set up for the waterworks as I realised whose POV this was from, but that idea is lovely - one small action making all the difference, both for his father and his mother. I love the way you have Remus both recognising him, and at the same time having no idea who he is, and that you never actually say that it's Teddy, but instead let us figure it out.

Only problem is that now I want to know what the future does end up holding for them!

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Review #6, by melian 

16th August 2010:
Oooh, nice twist! I take it this is an AU version of events where Remus and Tonks did in fact live, thanks to Teddy. I had assumed it was him with the turquoise hair though of course that didn't make any sense, so that penultimate sentence cleared things up a lot. Wow. I have honestly never really thought of a reality where Remus and Tonks survived but its' a nice take on things because really, they had next to no time, didn't they. Sigh. Good on you, Teddy. I'd love for this to have been true.

Great story!

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Review #7, by ericajen 

14th August 2010:
A timeturner mishap! How incredibly clever! That's so original, your muse must love you to help you come up with such interesting things like that. I was so confused in the beginning, just wondering why there was someone with turquiose hair because Teddy was only a baby. But anything is possible with a timeturner. That was awesome. I love the idea and you wrote it just as well. Fantastic work.

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