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Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

30th March 2011:
YAY The Longbottoms are reunited at last! Horray for happy endings

Off to the next chapter

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Review #2, by momotwins 

18th August 2010:
Hi again! I'm so proud of you for writing so many chapters for the collab. House pride!

Oh wow, I loved this. I couldn't look away, it was so wrenching and absorbing, I loved their breakout from St. Mungo's. Frank was a popular and talented Auror, it was great to see him starting to come back to his powers again. Oh I wish so much this would have happened for Neville. I seriously am crying reading the ending. Ach, you're killing me here! It's beautiful. Tragic and beautiful and I wish it was real so Neville could have this. Great job on the spot of AU.

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Review #3, by witch_in_training 

14th August 2010:
Aww! I don't think I've ever read a story where the Longbottoms get their memory back! At the very least, I've never read one like this. I loved the Healer's confusion, and their excitement, and of course Neville's reaction. Thought I admit, I might have expected him to be a bit more stunned. All the same, it was sweet!

And poor Frank, having his memory back only to get smacked with a door in the attmempt to find his son xD. Ah well, he'll be okay.

I had no idea what the story called "Remember" was going to be about when I clicked on it, but it turned out to be original and heart-warming.


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Review #4, by propertyoftheHBP 

14th August 2010:
Oh my goodness, this is such a sweet idea. It's always nice to think that Alice and Frank may have had a recovery someday, and you've written in believably. What I like is that they didn't have one single "Aha!" moment. Everything came back in little snippets of memory, speech included. It made it much more realistic and believable than if Alice had just woken up and bounced out of bed.

I really love all of your pieces for this collab, they've all got fantastic ideas and are written superbly.

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