6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

30th March 2011:
OH MY GOSH I LOVED IT!!! Getting to see the forrest scene from Lily's POV was Amazing! GREAT CHAPTER excellent read and now i'm off to the next one

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Review #2, by momotwins 

18th August 2010:
Oh I love this. I love seeing this scene from Lily's point of view. She'd be just as desperate to see Harry as he was to see her. You really captured it beautifully. I loved the line where she realizes he's ready to die - so horribly tragic and so beautiful. Wow this is a great chapter! I want to cry!

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Review #3, by melian 

15th August 2010:
That was lovely! I have a tear in my eye - it was so emotive and I could really feel Lily's love, her concern, her desire to protect her son. Nice twist, too, that the departed were the ones who saved Harry by protecting his heart, aside from the bit that held a part of Voldemort, so that the killing curse could only reach that one section. Even after she died, even sixteen years after she died, Lily's love and sacrifice could still save her son. It's a lovely thought.

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Review #4, by ericajen 

14th August 2010:
This is the first story I've read about those who came with the Resurrection Stone. I was no disappointed. I think you did amazing. I would have liked to have seen a bit more original dialogue, perhaps, but I know the urge to stay true to canon can sometimes be unbeatable, hehe. But what a clever idea there at the end! With them wrapping themselves around Harry's heart. I think that was a nice touch.

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Review #5, by propertyoftheHBP 

14th August 2010:
I love this idea! I like seeing the scene through Lily's eyes and the description in the beginning of them leaving to Harry is really great. I love how the souls go and protect Harry's soul--that's a really great idea. I loved the second-to-last paragraph--I'm not sure why, but the way it's written is so nice. The characterization of everyone is great, this was a wonderful read. :)

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Review #6, by queen_luna 

8th August 2010:
Wow, this was incredible! I never bothered to think about how exactly Lily, James, Sirius, and Remus helped Harry when they were summoned by the stone, and I think you did an amazing job describing how they protected the parts of Harry that weren't Voldemort. Very nicely written! :)

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