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Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

30th March 2011:
poor neville WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE?

Any way great chapter very well written and now i'm off to review the next one

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Review #2, by momotwins 

18th August 2010:
Ah you wrote about crazy Bella! Love it. The opening paragraph is just amazing. It really feels like her brand of crazy. All the mad cackling, the taunting, she has such fun with it all. Total sociopath. You really did well with this!

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Review #3, by melian 

15th August 2010:
She really is evil, isn't she? Bellatrix. I've read a few collab pieces from her POV and every single one gives me the shivers. I'm not sure if this is AU and she actually does kill Neville, or if this is canon and he survives that encounter somehow, but either way it's nasty. It is a shame in a sense that Neville wasn't the one to finish her off, but I suspect that JKR was very keen on none of her younger characters actually killing anyone on page so that was probably why Molly got it ... it did lack that neatness, though, didn't it? And for one mad woman, Bella certainly had a long memory. Horrible, horrible thing, gettting inside her head. You're brilliant for having done it so well, but it's still given me the shivers.

In other works, great job!

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Review #4, by ericajen 

14th August 2010:
You killed Neville? How evil. Evil, but still good. I think you wrote Bellatrix really well which is a hard feat to accomplish, so well done on that front. She perfectly insane and wild and well, insane (which deserves to be said twice because of how insane she is). I liked the contrast between her dark playfulness and Dolohov just wanting to move forward anf finish the tasks at hand. Good job.

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Review #5, by propertyoftheHBP 

14th August 2010:
Wow, you have Bellatrix's characterization down a T here. She's so insane, with all the talk of laughter and the laughter itself, I love it. The dialogue between her and Dolohov in the beginning is superb. The image of her skipping into the Great Hall is crazy but perfect. The scene between her and Neville is perfect. (Though I'm a bit curious as to if Neville actually died, since she did shoot the final curse to him when she wasn't looking.)

In case you can't tell, I absolutely loved this. :) You did a fantastic job.

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Review #6, by queen_luna 

7th August 2010:
I think you captured Bellatrix's character very well with this short piece. I can just imagine her laughing her way through the battle, thinking of all the death and destruction as mere fun and games. Nicely done! :)

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