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Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

30th March 2011:
So it was Astoria's Sister who Ginny comforted during the battle. Now everything makes sense (not sure what everything is but whatever it is it makes sense now)

Great chapter very well written and now i'm off to the next one

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Review #2, by momotwins 

18th August 2010:
Okay, I have to admit, after reading your Winky chapter, I was expecting great feats of characterization in this. You did not disappoint! I like the girl Ginny was comforting being Daphne, and the effects of concussion making Ginny look hazy to her (or so I assume, anyway) and making her a little loopy even. What a great chapter. You wrote the fighting well, the friendly fire, and Ginny's characterization was spot-on as well.

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Review #3, by long_live_luna_bellatrix 

6th August 2010:
I liked how you threaded the pessimism throughout this, in nearly every thought of Daphne's. You not only introduced the trait, you followed through with it, a fact I was pleased with. And then, towards the end, you exposed the despair of someone caught in the middle of a battle they don't want to be in. The fact that Daphne, a strong willed Slytherin, stopped caring who won said something. And the last line expressed such hope, such a turnaround in Daphne's thoughts, it was touching. I particularly liked the bit about snakes and lions not getting along. It was a nice snapshot of the battle.

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