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Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

29th March 2011:
evil nightmares but I guess everyone has them once in a while

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Review #2, by momotwins 

18th August 2010:
I love how you write Ron and Hermione, you know. I know this is a brief glimpse at them, but it made me smile to see Hermione waking him up to feed the baby. Ron as a father is just adorable, too, I love his interactions with baby Rose. Man that was a horrible dream he was having. Very well written chapter as always, m'dear!

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Review #3, by theelderwand 

14th August 2010:
Melanie, this was fantastic!!

At first I was at a loss, was this AU? A lost moment. But then once I was sure it was Bella that Ron was about to off, I forgot alll that and just started to root for him to KILL! LOL!

I loved the fade out of the dream. You caught the characterizations there perfectly. And Ron being wrapped around Rose's finger, that made infinite sense. Your closing line was superb!

I really loved this and wish there was more.


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Review #4, by propertyoftheHBP 

14th August 2010:
Wow, I didn't see the part where it was a dream coming at all. I was thinking how ironic it was that everyone was surrounding him while he was trying to do it, and then comes the "Ohh...". I really liked this, though, I haven't seen too many pieces where the action isn't actually at the battle so this was nice.

I'm curious, though--was Ron actually reliving a memory that had happened in his mind, or was it just a recurring dream? Hmm. Also, the line with "checkmate" was utter genius. :)

I really, really liked this! Good job.

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Review #5, by long_live_luna_bellatrix 

25th July 2010:
Haha, no surprise you wrote Ron! And then, as a Bellatrix fan, I was quite pleased you worked her in there as well. While it was going on, I wondered, "Why are all these people calming watching Ron while he steels himself to kill someone?" That added a sense of the surreal, but I didn't suspect it would turn into a dream. And then I wanted to know how the dream and reality would be connected... and you did it. Great last line, and of course Ron was referring to a wet diaper, never something worse...

It was a comfortable, engaging read. Everything flowed with ease, and felt very natural. Great work and go claws!

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