7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Ginny45 

29th March 2011:
First one shot on Greyback I have ever read!

You did him perfectly in my mind, his entire animalistic nature is spot on in this chapter. You did it subtly though it wasnt pure carnage. I also adore how you slipped in the section about Remus.

Ginny45/RandomRed xxx
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Review #2, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

29th March 2011:
ok its official Greyback is insane, crazy, evil and every combination of those words.

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Review #3, by strawberrydarhling 

24th March 2011:
I love one-shots about Fenrir, so naturally I loved this one!

I really like your use of desciprion in this, especially in the first couple of paragraghs :) And I also liked how you said Fenrir could smell the fear of people.


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Review #4, by theelderwand 

19th August 2010:
"I turned back to face the castle, I was one of the most dangerous people my master had and I wasn't going to let him down."

I really think this was my favorite line, and you best. You've captured the animal nature of Fenrir wonderfully here. So dark, so full of blood lust. I really liked it (don't take that the wrong way. LOL!)

Excellently in character here.


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Review #5, by melian 

15th August 2010:
Oooh, how ominous! I like how you approached Greyback - his contempt of Lupin for not embracing his "gift" was horribly in character and his desire to finish Bill off was just alarming. Which means to say, you captured him brilliantly. I liked how the Death Eaters were wary of him themselves, which suggests that he was a bit of a loose cannon, and I think you proved that in that last sequence when he ignored the door and smashed the windows instead, in search of fresh meat. Ugh. Reading this POV makes me really really pleased that he got killed in the end, because someone as evil as this doesn't deserve to live. Great job!

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Review #6, by ericajen 

14th August 2010:
Whew. That was intense. I liked the way you cpatured the dark and twisted and kind of (okay, a lot) creepy feeling of the Death Eaters. They're so amazing when they're written like this, so insanely dark. I love that. And this is no exception to that rule of mine. And the way that he sees being a werewolf as a gift is a really interesting perspective and probably one that is true. Good job.

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Review #7, by maskedmuggle 

28th July 2010:
Wow! I loved this!
It was really well written!
The perspective from Greyback (I'm assuming) was really interesting, and very to character I thought! Perhaps you could've toned down the "Master" business, as I doubt he would've been that loyal... but everything else was absolutely fantastic!
It's also hard to believe the Greenhouses were completely empty with no charms whatsoever on them.. but... still a great short one shot! :)

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