6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

29th March 2011:
Go Winky, Go Winky lol i'm so proud of her for finding the courage to fight through Dobby

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Review #2, by momotwins 

18th August 2010:
Holy crap! I've never seen a story from a house-elf perspective before. You did a fantastic job with Winky. You really nailed their speech patterns, and even believable names (normally I don't like house-elf names in fanfics). Great job! I'm really impressed by this chapter.

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Review #3, by melian 

15th August 2010:
This is lovely. Really, it is. You have really captured Winky's mannerisms and speech idiosyncracies perfectly, and her thought processes feel absolutley spot on. I loved how she got upset about the elves taking things out of the kitchen that didn't belong to them, because good house elves just don't do that. It fit perfectly with what we know of Winky and her work ethic. And then, the news of what happened to Dobby being what sets her off? Brilliant. And so well worded, too - I could hear the house elves conversing in my head and it was hilarious. Fantastic story.

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Review #4, by Ronsgirl29 

14th August 2010:
aw winky! That's so sad yet sweet at the same time. I love the idea of winky finding the courage to fight in dobbys name, it's so touching :]

great oneshot, I loved it!

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Review #5, by ericajen 

14th August 2010:
I liked this! You wrote from a house elves perspective really well. I'm glad you went for it with the dialogue and stuff, which can be hard to accomplish and to get it to look decent. Writing house elves it difficult. You did really well with it, though. And I think you captured Winky's character in it's essence. It worked out wonderfully.

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Review #6, by queen_luna 

22nd July 2010:
I've never read anything from the perspective of a house-elf before, and I think you did an excellent job capturing the way they think and speak. I loved the part at the end, with Winky taking charge of her own life for once and fighting for her freedom. Very nicely done! :)

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