4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

29th March 2011:
great piece:) nice to see a little bit of Humor in the collab :) off to the next chapter. so many reviews so little time..

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Review #2, by Northumbrian 

22nd August 2010:
That surprised me, a nice little normal Fred story which did not end in his death.
It is all the better for that, I think. You show us Fred the businessman, Fred the joker, Fred the organiser the Fred who is (as heshould be) completely unaware that he won't see the dawn. That makes this one of the most powerful Fred stories I've read.

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Review #3, by blueirony 

14th August 2010:
How do you do it? No, really, how do you do it? I swear, no matter how much I read of your writing, I always walk away in awe of it.

You have this way of telling stories that I absolutely adore. And you did that in this. You just told a story. And yet you still managed to capture emotions and thoughts of people, even with your simple writing. I don't know how you do it. I really don't. But I wish I did!

The interactions between the twins and those around them was spot-on. The things they said, the things they did, it was all just so in character. And I loved it. I loved how the twins really took charge in this and it really suited them. Their characters were exactly how I picture them in my head. And even though you had them being quite serious in this, they still seemed to be like the Fred and George that we know and love. Brilliant.

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Review #4, by theelderwand 

11th July 2010:
Ladies this was fabulous!

Curious tho as to how much of the locations for the passageways is canon and how much is your own.

Your story fits right in with DH, smooth as silk.

I really enjoyed it!


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