6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by adluvshp 

30th March 2011:
aww. so sad and touching.

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Review #2, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

27th March 2011:
Poor Oliver having to watch his sister die while in his arms that has to be one of the hardest things to watch and I hope I never have to

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Review #3, by momotwins 

18th August 2010:
Haha - Oliver's reasons for being willing to fight for Harry is Harry's Quidditch skill, I love it! That's so very Oliver. I never thought of him having a little sister, that was so sad and sweet to see him taking care of her. And she was a Ravenclaw! This was such a tragic chapter, but you did a great job with it.

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Review #4, by propertyoftheHBP 

14th August 2010:
Oh, this was so sad. But I loved how, in the beginning, you had Neville be the one to ask Oliver to help him, to be the one who readied him for the shock of all the people. It really showed how far Neville's come since his first year, even since the day with the thestrals, and it was a really nice touch.

I love the idea of the little girl Ginny comforted being Oliver's sister--his grief was written so well, I had tears welling up in my eyes near the end of the story. :'( I also really liked how you worked in the "You're just as sane as I am" line, it was sweet.

This was a great read! You captured the aspects of the Final Battle well. :)

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Review #5, by blueirony 

14th August 2010:
That little girl was his sister? That is just terrible. Poor Oliver. Poor Victoria! I never would have in my wildest dreams have been able to make that connection. And it was a very unique interpretation of who that unknown girl was.

I love that you made Oliver in this so Oliver. His character was just spot-on, especially his comment about Harry and Quidditch. I really enjoyed that.

This was so sad, though. Especially those last few words of Victoria. So sad. But so beautiful.

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Review #6, by ekroman 

1st July 2010:
Aww.. That's really all I can say:'(

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