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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by adluvshp 

30th March 2011:
this was so nice. i loved this one. Draco *sigh*

~AD

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Review #2, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

27th March 2011:
Yay for Draco doing the right thing he has a heart after all.who knew?

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Review #3, by In The Shadows I Dwell 

22nd August 2010:
Wow, I love how you've tied in the epilogue with the battle in a way that worked so perfectly as all these characters can so easily be placed doing exactly what you've described on Platform 9 and 3/4. It is this that makes the situation you've described work so brilliantly, it is highly possible that that nod that Draco gives Harry carried something more within it, something more that we shall never know. However, now is not the time for me to discuss such things, I must attempt to keep on topic.

Draco is so much more intelligent than many have given him credit for and I particularly love how you have him drawing all the connections together as they occur. It shows that he is more than many give him credit for. However, I love how you manage to tell his entire journey during the final battle in so few words with such a magnificent array of emotions and descriptions that made me wish that it would go on for even just a little longer, however, now looking back on the ending, I'm glad I reached it as it was perfect and fit Draco's character perfectly!

Be sure to keep up the lovely work!
- Ashlee

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Review #4, by slytherangoddess 

14th August 2010:
wow... I think you nailed Draco's feelings and thoughts perfectly.I found myself smiling when he decided that he wanted Harry to win. Your details really made the story pop and I absolutely loved it

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Review #5, by blueirony 

14th August 2010:
Draco is such a complicated character and the way you portray his thoughts are exactly what I would imagine him to be thinking during the battle. He was probably terrified out of his mind and definitely would have come to the realisation that he wanted Voldemort defeated. And then more confusion would have come to him.

You wrote that here. You wrote it so well. And I loved how you turned it into kind of a flashback and tied it in with the epilogue of DH. That was really clever.

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Review #6, by Northumbrian 

7th July 2010:
Well, you've managed to make me feel some sympathy for Draco. I didn't think it was possible. Well done.

N

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Review #7, by theelderwand 

3rd July 2010:
You've done an excellent job of getting into Draco's head here. I especially like the hard fear he feels when he thinks his life is forfeit because he was master of the Elder Wand. That was really well done.

But, my favorite part has to be the slow reveal that all this is going through his mind during the epilogue.

Great stuff!

TEW

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