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Review #1, by adluvshp 

30th March 2011:
nice one there again!! well-written!


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Review #2, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

27th March 2011:
it's a family reunion that unfortunately had a sad ending with the death of a weasley and tonks and lupin and everyone else that died

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Review #3, by Northumbrian 

22nd August 2010:
Well another wonderful portrait of a Weasley. Poor Percy, It must have taken a lot of courage to return to his family, to admit that he was wrong and to face the consequences.
I loved your characterisation of Perce, he's still a bit stuffy, but at least he's able to take the mickey out of himself a bit (that's probably a natural defence mechanism from the twins).
It was nice to discover that he'd even sacrificed his private life in his opursuit of a career. That simply made me feel more sorry for him.

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Review #4, by In The Shadows I Dwell 

22nd August 2010:
Brilliant. There is barely another word I can use to describe how much I am in awe of this piece right now. Detailing how exactly that Percy came to end up at the battle itself when it seemed as though he may not have made an appearance at all. I particularly loved his reunion with his family, which was a nice touch, because as we know his absence really affected the Weasley's, they just weren't the same without that final member of the family. No matter what anyone said.

I also love the conversation between Percy and the twins, it was realistic and really made me think of it all in terms of the fact that it would be one of the last nice family moments they would have all together before Fred's death. It's fics like these that take characters I don't necessarily like and make me find a reason to actually like them again. Well done on yet another brilliant fic!

- Ashlee

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Review #5, by blueirony 

14th August 2010:
This was lovely. You delved into Percy's character in a way that I have rarely seen in stories and it made me really relate to him. You had this perfect blend of confusion, nervousness and loyalty to his family and you mixed his emotions really well into this.

I loved the interactions between Percy and his brothers. It was just so... family-like. And it was lovely to be able to read that, knowing that the battle was still continuing around them; a small moment of love and family amongst all the terror.

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Review #6, by theelderwand 

3rd July 2010:
Mel, you never cease to amaze.

Exellent bit of fic. I always wondered how he got to Hogwarts without getting hexed. Another 'duh' moment - of course he had to have an inside track with Aberforth.

Don't know how you do it, but you make it look effortless. You completely got into Percy's head in an amazingly believable way. Well done!


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Review #7, by momotwins 

29th June 2010:
This is lovely. You captured Percy very well. I loved his interchange with Fred. So lovely, and so heartbreaking that soon after, Fred will be gone. Really nicely done, lovely writing and brilliant characterization!

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