6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by adluvshp 

30th March 2011:
Wow. Wonderful piece of work. its truly heart wrenching! extremely well-written!


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Review #2, by Ginny45 

29th March 2011:
I am kind of glad someone killed off a member of the Golden Trio but I love how she got out those words of loyalty to Harry. It was the perfect ending to her life if it was to end in the battle.

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Review #3, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

27th March 2011:
No hermione dead? Why? anyway great chapter now off to the next one

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Review #4, by strawberrydarhling 

24th March 2011:
I enjoyed reading this as it was different from all the others and sticks out (but in a good way). I also really liked the last line.


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Review #5, by blueirony 

14th August 2010:
Hermione? AND Remus? I admire your strength because, as a writer, I could never kill two such lovable characters off in such a small span of a one-shot!

I visibly recoiled when Remus was killed in this. And then I was staring in shock when Hermione died. But, you know what? I absolutely love that Hermione managed to get those last few words in. It was fitting that her loyalty to Harry never wavered, even in the last few moments of her life.

I cannot believe that I loved this considering how sad it was, but you wrote it beautifully.

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Review #6, by CornishPixie 

10th July 2010:
This was a very sad AU deal. I didn't want to see Hermione die! But man, you did a great job of portraying Antonin Dolohov. From the haughty arrogance to being able to know how Lupin died. Hoo-boy! I especially liked it at the end, I think this specific example of an unsatisfactory victory could be how many of the Death Eaters feel. Because he bested Hermione...but he would always be a slave of Voldemort's basically. Right?

Very well written, and good work showing me a glimpse of the ideals behind someone on the other side of the battle! Great job!

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