7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by adluvshp 

29th March 2011:
OMG. this was so... i don't know.. intense like. sorta different. good writing.


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Review #2, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

26th March 2011:
Yay for lavender standing up and being a hero for Hannah! go gryffindor!

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Review #3, by In The Shadows I Dwell 

22nd August 2010:
Brilliant take on Lavender I must say. I always thought of her as selfish and rather annoying personally however you've given her something completely different to what we usually see here. It is clear that the boy's words gave her something that gave her the will to fight on, and in particular the strength to fight for others when they could no longer fight for themselves. I had a good giggle reading the line: "For Merlinís sake, Iím too SINGLE to die. I thought that simply was so Lavender I just could not help but laugh. She was perfectly in character from beginning to end and I loved reading it.

The writing was perfect and it really gave the story something unique and wonderful, and it really showed that there was a number of ways that Lavender could have ended up at the mercy of Fenrir Greyback. The last line was also great as it showed simply how much the boys death had truly affected her, really showing me that she was more human that I first thought her be. So thank you, thank you for giving me something I would never have found had I not read your story! :)

Keep up the great work!
- Ashlee

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Review #4, by slytherangoddess 

14th August 2010:
I'm glad that you chose Lavender for this fic. She's such an interesting character and you portrayed her very well. She was always one to zone out and you hit that on the head perfectly! great job!

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Review #5, by theelderwand 

3rd July 2010:

Ok, so you got the exploding grandma AND bridesmaids in there and then you turn on a dime and go so dark, so serious. This is an amazing piece of writing here, one for which you should be exceedingly proud.


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Review #6, by blueirony 

29th June 2010:
You really showed two sides to Lavender in this. First, the one that really is just the average teenage girl who has fears just like everyone else. And then you also showed the side to her that is determined to fight and not back down. I loved that. You really captured her emotions.

The unnamed boy really stood out for me in this. The things he said were just so true and it was horribly sad that he had to go, because I think he was really something special.

Brilliant writing!

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Review #7, by Zaphiie 

28th June 2010:
This is brilliant! Wow, I love your writing, and I love the development you showed in Lavender over such a short story. You've even managed to incorporate humour at the start, which plenty of these battle stories are lacking. Awesome job!

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