4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by adluvshp 

29th March 2011:
It was fast and yet with feeling.

Good one!


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Review #2, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

24th March 2011:
this was an interesting POV and i actually found humor in it even if it wasn't meant to be funny some scenes were...

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Review #3, by theelderwand 

28th June 2010:
This was GREAT! You've captured Fred perfectly - exactly how I'd thought he'd be thinking during the battle. You've woven this in seamlessly with what we already know, with the quotes you've used. And exploding bridesmaids strike again, eh? LOL

Excellent action, excellent "choreography" of the fighting. But such a shame he had to die.

Last Man Standing, this was an excellent flourish.

Great story.


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Review #4, by blueirony 

28th June 2010:
Oh, reading this was so sad because I knew what was coming. Even through the playful interactions with his brothers, his protectiveness of his sister and his other brothers and the intensity of the duels, I just had this feeling in the pit of my stomach while reading this.

But that idea of using the Last One Standing? It made the blow a little less severe. It brought the whole thing together and almost made Fred's death not one in total vain, almost poetic and justified.

Really sad but really lovely.

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