6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by slytherinchica08 

30th March 2011:
I really liked seeing this piece from Kreachers pov and how he got all the house elves to help him in the war. I found this to be a really good and motivational piece. I liked the speech he gave to the other house elves and how he turned around and started walking thinking nobody was going to join him only to find out that everyone joined him even winky in the end. it was a nice piece seeing how they all decided to join the war. Great Job.


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Review #2, by adluvshp 

29th March 2011:
a very nice and hopeful chap. good to read kreacher =)



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Review #3, by MalfoysCarolinaGirl2010 

24th March 2011:
Horray for kreacher rallying the house elves! even people/creatures you don't expect are joining the light side for this battle collab :)

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Review #4, by melian 

15th August 2010:
And again I see one of the key themes in the HP series rearing its head again - the idea of doing what is right instead of what is easy. And you chose an excellent vehicle for this particular tale, with Kreacher rousing the House Elves to go out and fight. I liked the example he used of Regulus and how he had treated Kreacher, and the parallel with Harry was very well done. Excellent job - I almost feel the urge to go out and fight myself now!

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Review #5, by ericajen 

14th August 2010:
I keep reading these stories about the same characters that I wrote about and realizing that mine don't hold a candle to some of these!

Your Kreacher tale here is really good. I adore reading about house elves (they're just so cute, you know? hehe) and this was no exception to that. And the integration of Winky was really cute.

The only critique I would give as that they had awful good grammar for house elves. On that same note, having written house elves, I know how difficult it is to actually try and pull of writing something badly on purpose, hahah.

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Review #6, by blueirony 

28th June 2010:
This was so sweet!

The idea that Kreacher led the house-elves into battle is really cute. I loved his speech. You can tell that he really does want to repay those who have been kind to them but, more than that, he wants to be like those he idolises. And that really shone through in his passionate speech.

I loved Winky in this, too. Both the characterisations of the two house-elves was really well done and it's lovely to see how it wasn't just the people who wanted to fight, but magical creatures, as well.

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