3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by George Whitman 

8th November 2009:
Very solid write. Most of your characterizations are close to what J.K. intended. I also liked how yo put a looser feel to the trio's sixth year. Good old Luna! Well done!

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Review #2, by Celtic_Dreamer7 

24th July 2009:
Very nicely written. I especially like the way you kept Luna in character! I knew they were going to get caught by someone! Great job!


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Review #3, by RonsGirlFriday 

13th July 2009:
I can't believe they got caught! Stupid boys.

This is such a fun piece! You write Luna really well, especially her openness and honesty, like how she acknowledges that the cork necklaces really aren't that pretty and she sees why nobody would want to wear them.

And I like how a few DA members went along with her plan for their own reasons -- like just for the joy of spraying butterbeer all over the place. (That's so very Ron!) All of them were in character, really, and that was one of the things that made it so enjoyable to read.

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