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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by RonsGirlFriday 

11th June 2009:
Oh, this is BRILLIANT! I loved the riddle-solving, and how they had to work together and use the actual flowers. Maybe I'm just emotional lately, but I thought the riddle/poem that appeared was touching and poignant - how they had to acknowledge and lay aside their grudges, and how each of them was "meant to be a friend" and "a brother lost" (perfect choice of words, I thought). And anything that involves the symbolic clasping of hands is good in my book - I'm a sucker for that kind of thing!

I also thought your characterization was good - of Harry, his three new companions, and even Ron and Hermione in the beginning (Hermione especially - you nailed it when she looked a little bit upset at not having been chosen - ha! It's so like her!)

Thank for writing such a fun and meaningful piece!

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Review #2, by Celtic_Dreamer7 

10th June 2009:
That was good. A few mis-spelled words but nothing that took away from the story. I liked how they had to join forces to figure out the riddle. Good job.

~Celtic~

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