5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by fall_for_you 

21st September 2009:
I really liked this chapter! I really like when people write about minor characters, like Hannah and Zabini. Everyone has a different interpretation of what these less important characters would be like. I thought the whole Slytherin-Hufflepuff point of view was rather unique, and interesting to read. Great job! :)

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Review #2, by lost_in_imagination 

18th August 2009:
I LOVED this story!:D It was a really nice build up - both scentence wise and in general - , it had originality, and I simply loved the story...^^, On my top 3 by far! Unfortunately there were quite a lot of writing errors, so I can't give you number 1...:( And a bit before the middle I came across Susan Bones...?:s Unless it was supposed to say Hannah Abbot I didn't fully understand that part. What I like the most about this story, though, is that when so many stories feel like they're written to fit the united part of the contest, in your story; it felt like the union was just a part of the whole story naturally:D That takes good writing!;)
PS: I sincerely hope you find Neverland (that way you can write all about it for us;D)! *my way of saying 'cool pen name!'*^^,

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Review #3, by Pookha 

21st June 2009:
This story fulfills the challenge very nicely. We see unity being built in an unlikely relationship. I really like that you used minor characters like Hannah and Blaise because it makes the ships seem more believable than if you had used Ginny/Draco or something like that.

You do a great job presenting the small intricacies of their relationship while making sure that they both understand the bigger picture of their star-crossed love.

I think this is probably the best of the collaboration stories that I have read.

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Review #4, by RonsGirlFriday 

10th June 2009:
An unexpected friendship! I liked how you went through all the phases of their friendship and ended with the battle and Blaise reflection on the realizations he's made.

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Review #5, by Celtic_Dreamer7 

4th June 2009:
Nice. I never thought of Hufflepuff and Slytherin being friends. That was a different storyline. Very nice.


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