4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by lost_in_imagination 

17th August 2009:
I liked this one:) I felt it was original and true to the storyline. The only thing I would have to comment on would be Luna; she didn't feel quite in character as her 'floating' self. But, hey, writing about existing characters can be hard; everyone already have an image of them ready. Other than that it was good and showed well the unity of the houses:)

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Review #2, by Pookha 

21st June 2009:
As far as it went, this story was very nicely done. I think that would have rounded it out was a bit from Severus' pov where he's contemplating the punishments he's handing out. I really believe that Snape was doing his best to protect the kids from the others like the Carrows by meting out harsh-seeming, but actually not so harsh punishments.

The start of the story and the end bit where you describe what happened would have been better if you had shown it from a character's pov rather than an omniscient narrator merely telling the facts.

I think this story has a lot of potential.

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Review #3, by RonsGirlFriday 

10th June 2009:
A good look at the efforts of the other students who were at Hogwarts while Harry was off on his mission. :-)

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Review #4, by Celtic_Dreamer7 

1st June 2009:
Well done. I often thought of how the others at the school were holding up during the year while the trio were absent. My only complaint/cc would be that it was too short. It was a good story but I wanted it to be longer so that I could continue reading it, lol.

Well done.


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