5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by x3CherryWatermelonx3 

23rd December 2009:
Absolutely love it! Even though it was a shorter chapter, it still matched the others with its quality. Amazing job:)

Author's Response: Thank you.

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Review #2, by RonsGirlFriday 

14th June 2009:
Ooh, Charlie's finally here! Although I do like how we got to know Kate pretty well over the course of a few chapters before Charlie entered the picture again.

You have a really nice way with words. I especially noticed in this chapter when you were describing the Ministry -- for example, with this line:

"No one seemed particularly happy to be there but everyone understood its necessity; one important step toward reaching some penultimate goal."

That, as well as the description of the Ministry as an institution that had failed everyone repeatedly. It's very fitting of the Ministry we know from the HP series -- all wrapped up in its own importance, but woefully ineffective.

Great job again, of course!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad the more snarky comments about the Ministry stood out in a good way. Somewhere along the way, Kate as a character started channeling some old Moody "Ministry Malcontent." Maybe that's just a bit of me sneaking into Kate. Thanks for another awesome review.

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Review #3, by RemusGal 

31st May 2009:
Another lovely descriptive chapter. The two older wizards arguing about the young witch with the stolen lacewings were quite funny. I also liked Kate's wondering what was happening back at the dig, and feeling slightly guilty for hoping they didn't make too many discoveries without her. Those little glances into her character really flesh her out. You have a lot of balls in the air (settings, characters, intrigues) and I hope some of them start to come together soon. I'm really enjoying your prose.

Author's Response: Thanks, RG. Hopefully at least a few things will really start to show their connection in the next chapter, but there are still more twists to come. I hope they don't disappoint. And I'm glad you liked my old guys. I might just have to bring them back later. Thanks so much for the R&R.

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Review #4, by daydream_it_to_life 

29th May 2009:
HE'S HERE!! =D Oh that's so exciting! And I've always loved Charlie. =] This was a really descriptive and fantastic chapter! I will never get over how vivid your writing is, and how I can see these places in my mind. I'm so glad you updated, it's made my day better, and I can't wait to see how Charlie and Kate react to each other, learn about their history, etc. I'm so excited! ^_^ Update soon and I'll be one happy camper.

Charlie Weasley! *dancing*

Author's Response: Thanks, daydream. You're reviews are always so much fun to read. The next chapter is all Kate and Charlie. I hope it won't disappoint. Thanks again!!

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Review #5, by TheForestAgain 

29th May 2009:
Ahhh! What a cliffhanger. Great story, great chapter!
Update sooon please!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try to post again in the next week or so. :)

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