5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by x3CherryWatermelonx3 

22nd December 2009:
Writing was brilliant! Amazing job with details and thouroughness!

Author's Response: I may have gotten a little too carried away with the details here, but thank you!

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Review #2, by timeturner14 

27th July 2009:
Wow. I am really enjoying this story so far. Kudos to you for choosing a rarely used character to write about and creating such a detailed background and fleshed out story. You can tell that you really put a great deal of time and research into the story and I am looking forward to seeing how it unfolds. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you, timeturner14. I'm a bit of a perfectionist so I do try and at least pull up pictures or read about locations before I write on them. Whether that makes me thorough or just unimaginative I'm not sure, but either way, thank you for the R&R.

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Review #3, by daydream_it_to_life 

15th May 2009:
Simply fabulous, as always. =] I still absolutely adore your descriptions. I can't help but think that whoever just arrived is important. ;] You've got to update soon, because though it may not SEEM like much of a cliffie, I sense some underlying reason. ^_^ Maybe I'm just crazy. Lack of sleep and a long week can do that to a person. Either way, I can't wait to read more!

Ready for the ministry,

Author's Response: Thanks, daydream. You're reviews always make me smile. I'm shooting to have chapter four done by Friday. Thanks so much for the support!!

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Review #4, by RemusGal 

15th May 2009:
This was a pretty quiet chapter, but the descriptions of the city and the portkey office were excellent. I'm really enjoying the story.

Author's Response: Yeah, a little too quiet the more I look back on it. Hopefully you'll find that it picks up soon. Thanks for sticking with it and reviewing :)

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Review #5, by RandomRyter 

14th May 2009:
Well, the first exit may be good for you, but I personally would have loved for you to have kept going. This is quite good. Can't wait for her to see Charlie. The only thing is that I wish the chapters had a little more in them, which would also make them longer. It feels like I'm missing something. Love this FanFic, though!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comments. I totally agree, the chapters aren't as beefy as I really want. I've never written a drama/romance before and am struggling to find the right balance. Hopefully once Charlie joins the story (teaser next chapter and then all Charlie after that!) it will get a better rhythm. Hopefully it will be less boring after that. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

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