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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by AndrinaBlack 

20th December 2010:
You're covering me with fluff with this story collection. I don't know if I'll ever find my way out from the fluffyness. Which is not a bad thing. Fluff is lovely. Proposal and Christmas... I'll just go and write to Santa to give me a Christmas like that. Good job once again! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, you may need a visit to the dentist after this one ;) Too much fluff! Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it (despite being covered in fluff haha).

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Review #2, by MoonNRoses 

31st January 2009:
Aw... how sweet. I haven't read much of this ship... I see that I need to. LOL. Very cute story.

Author's Response: This is the only time I've written this ship. I might revisit them later. Teddoire can be a fun ship :) Thanks for the review!

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Review #3, by Georgia Weasley 

4th January 2009:
Very sweet. I love how you have Victoire a proper lady, a true daughter of Fleur, but also a Weasley. There's enough of that in there to warm her a little, and the ring shows it. What a neat twist to the ring, and her reaction is priceless. "To this man? And to that ring? Did he think she was stupid?" was just brilliant. Lovely.

Author's Response: Thanks! I've never written Teddy or Victoire before, I tried to give them bits of their parents but still distinct personalities. I'm glad you think it turned out all right.

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Review #4, by hsw 

11th December 2008:
Another sweet, fluffy one but with not much happening to comment on. I liked the first paragraph, actually, with the description of the street. You also always have a couple good one-liners in anything you write (but I'm not going to point them all out). The one about the parlour-trick was good though.

Author's Response: Yep, more fluff. This one's even more fluffy and pointless, but I couldn't help myself lol. The 500-1500 word constraint on the challenge was tough, it's hard to write something terribly interesting in that limit.

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Review #5, by I_LOVE_love 

6th December 2008:
I LOVE THIS SONG!! Ya had me singing along as I read your story! And that was so cute! I like Victoire's take on diamonds; I've never really thought about them like that, but I can see that...and Rubies are gorgeous! I think that that was sooo sweet and cute of Teddy, and, even from this short little one-shot, I think that he seems really kind and they they're really good for each other...I guess that stories are just like photos...they can speak thousands of more words than they show!

Author's Response: I'm not much of a fan of diamonds myself, I think they're a little boring. I prefer sapphires myself, which of course a ruby is just a red sapphire. Anyway this was my first Teddoire and I enjoyed the ship, might have to write them again sometime. Thank you for reviewing!

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Review #6, by fanwright19 

5th December 2008:
that is a nice storie about the next genaration and I love that teddy and victorie are together they are one of my favorites couples.

Author's Response: Thanks! That's my first Teddoire, I like that ship though. I might have to write more of them.

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